I am not really in a writing slump at the moment but everything I put down seems to become a long epic. Which judging my ticks and lack of comments do not go down so well. I have a couple on the go so be afraid.
Anyways this one I restrained my exuberance.
I like it - the 6 years twist was a nice touch!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sally. I do like to add a little zinger when I can. X
DeleteSo he's pregnant forever? I would love to see another pregnant caption like this, only this time it's a rebirth. Witch turns perv into sperm and rebirths him, only as a girl
ReplyDeleteThanks DK97. I think he could be pregnant for the rest of his life but who knows if he wishes hard enough again maybe he can give birth or change back.
DeleteI like the idea. I think he would haveto keep his memories and get some sort of Karma.
Wonderful....does he have to move every couple of months? Some of his neighbors might have noticed....maybe not right away but surely after the first couple of years!!!
ReplyDeleteI know what you mean about long epics....I have had more than a few posts start out as short one-liners grow out of all control....until I have to pull the plug before it takes over my life!!!!
Anyways
loved this one!!!
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Kaaren
Thanks Kaaren. I did not think about his neighbors. He would have to come up with some good fibs wouldn't he. Maybe tell them its twins or triplets so takes 18/27 months. Do you think they might buy it?
DeleteYes captions can take over the one I am doing at the moment has a very long make over description. its nice a squirmy to write but not sure it would get read.